Sunday, July 25, 2010

A House Comments

Rating: 5.0

Inside my chest there is a house,
Where many feet have tread.
Behind a sturdy bony blouse,
Where many stories have been read.
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Juan Olivarez
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Smoky Hoss 26 June 2011

Your words, from the heart obviously, are so warm and welcoming... makes me glad to 'know' you my friend. Only a man with grace and wisdom could write so wonderfully. Great poem!

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O my, this is awesome! Inside my chest there is a house..the heart being the foundation...where many feet have tread! Extreme metaphor, well expressed. All of what we should represent. Like a light set upon a hill for all to see. Enjoyable read: D

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Malaya Roses 01 August 2010

open mind and open heart with sincerity will make this world alive and a civilization will be better for all. Without boundries or parameters, the poem will reach every readers heart. 10 for you.

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