Friday, January 6, 2006

A Hot Shower, Not Comments

Rating: 4.7

This shower’s never hot enough
Not hot enough
However high I turn the knob
It runs hot for a minute, quite hot, then lukewarm
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Linda Hepner
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Scotty Dogg 14 January 2012

Loved it! Nine Girlie! S

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Michael Shepherd 24 July 2006

I like poems like power showers, Linda! They sting as they soothe!

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Chuck Audette 09 January 2006

I hear that cold, short showers will give you more 'poetry powers'. Or at least more time to sit and write them.... Seems to be working! - chuck

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Charles Chaim Wax 06 January 2006

the simple matters of life must be dealt with also even if not love death tears- the ordinary giving hope that poetry lives in every moment as does this fine poem

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Jeremiah Shine 06 January 2006

lOl can you up the thermostat at the bottom of the waterheater? this comment too is about nothing.

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Linda Hepner

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