A Horizon Comments

Then I met you again Just before closing my eyes On your lap, in the gold rays In an afternoon of my life madam I love this poem thanks 10++++! ! ! ! +

On your lap, in the gold rays In an afternoon of my life Your lips joined mine Silently flew the time, I breathed my last and thanks madam I absolute love your poem and poem writing so beautiful 10++++++

A beautiful write. Keep up the good work

The day I first met you....to....I breathed my last.... really painful.nice read.8+

Then I met you again Just before closing my eyes On your lap, in the gold rays In an afternoon of my life Great poem, thanks. 10++

Nice poem poetess. Loved it.

Beautiful and philosophical.A day, starts in morning with none in the sky and ends silently with last breath on somebody's lap, dearest and nearest.10++

Sun is the centre stage of life...morning -dawn- evening twilight...the sun does rise- - it never sets... it's for ever rising....some where.The centre of our universe and also us.. is the sun...we must converse...as the sun leads us fom the distant hill...from where it emerges ...till it sets for us only...in our distant horizon...O poet you will be one day like the sun.... when poetry of great poets is being sung. Hopefully I will be along too with you...ere the setting sun...in the distant horizon...poet well done

Excellent written with sound sentiment, emotion and mind. It is wonderful, go on dear poetess, expectation of poetic and arttistic phases are enlightening around you,10

A great start with a nice poem, Seema. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

Then I met you again Just before closing my eyes On your lap, in the gold rays In an afternoon of my life Your lips joined mine Silently flew the time, I breathed my last and Then as I looked around There was the Sun In the horizon. Beautiful poem Poet. Thanks for the sharing. 10++++

The day I met you next Just after dawn. A magnificent romantic poem. Exceptional indeed.

a beautiful poem of finding love when least expecting it? ...................well written Seema.

Sun in the horizon- -sun is in the center stage - - and again shining in the horizon while life mingles with death- -Such a wonderful poem of love- - thanks for sharing.To quote from the poem==== The day I met you next Just after the dawn On an auspicious chilly morning In a temple of Goddess and You had become my Sun The centre of my revolutions From Earth to sky, Still there was a Sun high Up in the horizon. Then I met you again Just before closing my eyes On your lap, in the gold rays In an afternoon of my life Your lips joined mine Silently flew the time, I breathed my last and Then as I looked around There was the Sun In the horizon.

Just before closing my eyes On your lap, in the gold rays In an afternoon of my life Your lips joined mine Silently flew the time, I breathed my last and Then as I looked around There was the Sun In the horizon.

Then I met you again Just before closing my eyes On your lap, in the gold rays In an afternoon of my life Your lips joined mine Silently flew the time, I breathed my last.... It's a rare melancholic song of separation dear Rimi, Keep this debut step progressive..You would end up soon with success.10 marks for this courageous attempt.

We come alone...we go alone.....we make love with all celestial bodies...the sky, the horizon, the sun...everything an epitome of God.......Seema.....your meticulous observations about life put in the delicate lines.......full 10 points to you...