Saturday, December 30, 2006

A Hopeless Dream Comments

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Dreaming
Crying
You're leaving
I'm dying
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Matt Mondschein
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Patricia Gale 21 May 2007

You could feel the heart of the writer as he pours his soul into verse... well penned

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Tahnee ? ? ? 30 December 2006

at the beginning of this i thought it was about broken love... then it turned into being a father. from what i can gather (which may be very wrong) is you have a child you wish you could spend more time with, and have the family that comes with having this kid. i hope it all works out for you... 'will running away make it easier for me will sticking around make things harder than they have to be' i loved those lines most. running away never solves the problem at hand, it just seems to bandaide the situation... is will always be there... but you have to do what you feel in your heart and think in your head... good luck.

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