A Hope To Achieve You...! ! ! Comments

thank you aastha... thanx alot

the flow in the writing, the continuity, emotions, feelings everything woven beautifully.. an honesty in your thoughts quite evident. nice write.

thank you thank you very much... its devoted to whom I love the most my girlfriend... my love my everything

GOOD POEM GOOD START. I think of a date with an endless sea...and following lines and thoughts represent present day poetry without imitating poetry of by gone centuries That is why you like my poems Feelings are flowing spontaneously in your words. That is good poetry Keep writing.Read my poems and commend.All the best LUCKY GOUTAM -KAVIN CHARALAN