Saturday, April 5, 2014

A Hope That You Too Will Understand Me Comments

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Days were passing merrily in my schooldays,
But who have heard of what the fortune says…
If I have heard it before, I would take each breath,
Just to live and for nothing else since then till death…
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Tawfeeq Hasan Khan
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Kirti Sharma 28 June 2014

nicely written! i like the rhyme.

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Hazel Durham 05 May 2014

You write with a great natural talent that flows so beautifully, with words that have such an impact, it's like a light that shines from your poems! !

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 30 April 2014

Great rhyming poem written in a fine talented style. Pls coment my latest poem too.

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Susan Lacovara 26 April 2014

You have a depth of playfulness beyond your years, and it reflects beautifully on your write. The way you select to express your emotions through poetry is sincere and true. PEACE

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Captain Herbert Poetry 24 April 2014

A very honest and pure poem WELL DONE Please visit my poems

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Gajanan Mishra 05 April 2014

Thirsty little eyes, wonderful write, go on writing. you are welcome. Please read my poems..

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Tawfeeq Hasan Khan

Tawfeeq Hasan Khan

Bilaspur, Chhattisgarh, India
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