Sunday, November 9, 2008

(a) ...Hope In A Lost Dream Comments

Rating: 3.0

In the hub of foreign tongues,
a hunger hatched a dreamt day
Induced fairy tale left hung,
a child is lost in sublime story
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Alice Cuenca
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Catrina Heart 06 February 2009

Brilliance in crafting this piece my friend...great poem as always...10+++

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premji premji 11 November 2008

candid vision.. well done...

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Drake Kinkaid 09 November 2008

I really like this Strange array of words you use Easy on the eyes

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Mifael Llauderes 09 November 2008

the last stanza is very affecting. the rhyme and the sentiment goes well as one... thanks for the comment

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Sarwar Chowdhury 09 November 2008

Thoughtful composition, beautifully expressed! .....10+

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