Wednesday, October 4, 2006

A Honeybee Comments

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a honeybee regarded me
from just outside the window glass.
and waited quite impatiently
to be allowed the right to pass.
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moon batchelder
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Joseph Daly 04 October 2006

This is a lovely poem Moon. I am a sucker for well written rhyme and so I took to this easily. It is well measured and a delightful narrative.

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