A Homeless Memory Comments
in every house we cross by
many memories hanged on the walls
no words to describe it
in my head they're non-stop hanging
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that's very beautiful..actually i'm in a bad mood but i have let the mood sit aside so i can express my opinion in a good way....'memories are hanged on the walls' this is a wonderful metaphor..i'm like yoonoos i liked the last stanza it was repeated two times and i think that's because you want the reader to focus on it or (ta2keed) .it's also musical..this poem is a good memory :) ..you know, i hope i can see you one day.i want to talk to you because you seem very (3a2el) . thanks for sharing
A very good poem Mohamed about the memories, you expressed your perspective in a fine way :) Good Work.
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7/21/2025 3:01:53 PM # 1.0.0
in a world of forgetting moments indeed...nice reflective poem