Sunday, January 25, 2009

A Homeless Man Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see him sit at the bus stop
Still remains, as the bus leaves
Hair askew, stubble on face
Perspiration and soil stain his sleeves
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vern eaker
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Pilar Killen 30 January 2009

brilliant words used too paint picture of the homeless...keep writing

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Vaibhav Pandey 30 January 2009

this is a brilliant poem.......so well done

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words can describe... great piece you have going here! ! !

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Garfield Grimmett 29 January 2009

very descriptive, great write and use of words.10

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