Friday, July 15, 2016

A Home Left Behind Comments

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Leaving home behind
against one's will
is no thing but leaving
one's own self
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Istabraq Al Ahmadi
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Habib 29 November 2018

Truly it is a unique poem which embodies our homeless time after the events of 2004 in Anbar.

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Nosheen Irfan 21 July 2016

This is marvelous. Written from the depths of heart, this poem is really poignant and its impact on the reader is great. The sense of homelessness and nostalgia flows in the smooth and easy rhythm of the verses. An excellent use of figures of speech in the poem. Kudos.10

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Annette Aitken 18 July 2016

What a lovely read, you can feel the sadness within the lines, and also having to endure the pain of been ripped out of one's home. Thanks for sharing Annette

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 July 2016

Kisses and memories! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Thanks for reading the poem and leaving a comment. It is very kind of you!

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