Saturday, October 27, 2007

A Home In My Home Comments

Rating: 5.0

Messengers are out,
dynasty strikes.
A haze of dust storm filters down in tearless eyes.
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Satish Verma
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Chitra - 23 July 2008

very nice, well composed

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Goldy Locks 27 October 2007

i just love your sentence juxtapositioning. I think it's surreal.

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