Sunday, March 20, 2022

A Home For Daphne 5 - " I Shall Mother All Your Children" Comments

Rating: 5.0

Together they completed
The nest with love and warmth
It was the prasuuthigruhh
for his Daphne, Aps boasted.
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Bri Edwards 30 October 2022

from online: 'Hanging Nests of Weaver Bird A completed nest resembles an upturned long necked pot or jug. Entrance is made in such a way that while the birds find their entry very easily it is extremely difficult for predators like snake to maneuver around to get to the entrance.' bri

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Bri Edwards 30 October 2022

five stars and a LOVELY ending to this series of A Home For Daphne. : ) I enjoyed the series very much. bri ;)

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Thank You, Thank you, my dear friend. And I think Aps also should be thanking…… Oooops!

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Bri Edwards 30 October 2022

Thanks for explaining prasuuthigruhh, as my online search did not help me. Re: 'And the most handsome her lover' As with some other lines in this series, I would arrange words differently, but I DO understand!

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 March 2022

Here, I try to picture Daphne, the character in the Greek Myth, making amends to her rejection of Apollo, as stated in the myth. The story tells us how she turned herself into a laurel tree to escape his pursuit.

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 March 2022

"I shall mother all your children" is a vow almost impossible in the world of Weaver Birds. The male weaver birds weave five to six nests in a breeding season and takes as many wives, each mothering his chicks.

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Unnikrishnan E S 22 March 2022

I had posted rejoinders to the posts of Richard, Rose Marie and LeeAnn. But all of them have just disappeared. Haunting ph.

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Richard Wlodarski 21 March 2022

Poem Hunter poets, such as yourself, entertain readers with flair and style. And I'm learning more about history, geography, culture and human relations than I had ever learned in school. Sincere thanks for the schooling. And the free entertainment. Who ever said that nothing's free?

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Unnikrishnan E S 22 March 2022

This series story is about the relationship in avian community. As you have experienced, it is true about human relationships as well. Thank you, Dear poet.

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Unnikrishnan E S 22 March 2022

This poem series was about the relationship in the avian species, but could be true of human beings too. Thank you

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 March 2022

Beautiful series! ! !

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Unnikrishnan E S 22 March 2022

I am enthralled to note that you liked the story.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 March 2022

A wonderful depiction of an enduring love and a love founded on trust.Great images and well crafted and presented.

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Unnikrishnan E S 22 March 2022

Hi Rose Marie, As I have stated in one of my Notes, this series is inspired by (1) the Autobiography of the famous Ornithologist Dr Salim Ali, named ‘The Fall of a Sparrow' and the fantastic story of the courtship of Daphne by Apollo, described in the Greek myth.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 21 March 2022

I am enjoying this series of poems Bravo!

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Unnikrishnan E S 22 March 2022

I feel so excited that a poet like LeeAnn liked the series. Thank you, LeeAnn

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Unnikrishnan E S 20 March 2022

I had posted a rejoinder to The note of Ms. Chakraborty. But is not appeared on the page yet. Feels bad…

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SRIJONI CHAKRABORTY 20 March 2022

Very very nice poem 👌 keep it up sir

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Unnikrishnan E S 20 March 2022

Thank you, Srijoni. I am so happy that you liked this poem (in a series of 5 parts) of love.

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Unnikrishnan E S 20 March 2022

I feel quite happy that you liked the series. Thank you.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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