A Home For Daphne 1 - The Season Of Love Comments

Unnikrishnan, if you want people to 'look for' more of your Daphne/Apollo poems, I suggest you mention them in your Poet's Notes on every D & A poem. : )

stanza 2: Do you want 'boat in a cove'? ? not bay in a cove? I give 5 stars. It seems Daphne should have plenty of other birds in the valley to vouch for the truth of her husband's words

I plan to return to your 'series of three' which looks now as if it has turned into a series of five! bri : )

I liked your double use of 'woven'! The last stanza is my favorite. And it reminds me of how, as a boy, I sometimes collected a nest from a tee or bush once I felt birds had finished with it. Later I learned they may have used it again. bri

BUT, though some of your English usage varies from mine, I DO understand you fully and am enjoying your story. : ) bri (in stanza 7, a spelling typo)

'He carried in his bills a barley spike' I say use 'bill', not 'bills'. 'Reaching back on the tall coconut tree': I'd say: 'Returning to the....'

Dr Salim in his poetic autobiography "The Fall Of A Sparrow "

I should thank the famous ornithologist Dr Salim Ali for providing insight into the lives of Baya Weaver Birds

A green leaf from Greek mythology woven into an enchanting poem ----Pains and agonies of a lost love so creatively expressed.