Friday, August 14, 2009

A Home For A Person In Heaven Comments

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a home for a person in heaven
who gives up arguments
even if he is on the truth
who gives up lying
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Rachel Butler 03 November 2009

'who has a high standard of character in life' Rachel Ann Butler

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Luwi Habte 21 September 2009

wow, nice peice love the rythm luwi

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Obinna Eruchie 13 September 2009

Ah! What a wonderful message on attaining peace.

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Nithya Raghavan 03 September 2009

that was a good one..i felt that it could have been a little longer using some poetic devices but the message was precise and perfect. keep it up!

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Ruerd Visser 30 August 2009

Wow lets bring some of this heaven down to earth! Would you do me the honor to read and comment on my latest work the wish of the heaven which will appear tomorrow? may angels guide you Boomwhisperer Ruerd

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Catrina Heart 29 August 2009

well said in a few...............10

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Surya . 28 August 2009

sure1 how true! beautiful poem.voted10 surya

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Kuji Soliman 28 August 2009

a home for a person in heaven who gives up arguments these are my favourite lines! good job

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Rajaram Ramachandran 28 August 2009

He can even make a heaven on this earth, if he followis your ideas.

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to have high standards in your chracter is taste of heaven in itself, it gives pleasure for you before giving it to others...those one who maintain their level of their heavenly manners do find their pleasure when they sip from thier treasure...apassionated and deep topic...beautifully said

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Lynda Robson 21 August 2009

Heaven welcomes such people, 10 Lynda xx

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Seema Aarella 19 August 2009

A person like him only can find a place in heaven.....heaven will be honoured by his presence!

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Louis Rams 16 August 2009

he joins the great of the great, because now he is with family who have led the way, and prepared for his stay. a ten

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Maria Barbara Korynt 16 August 2009

We will always think, what is happening with the ones, which are walking away, which we loved. We are worrying, because we want they to hit there, where in our opinion, they are deserved. It just causes that they until the end aren't walking away. We will always recall them and they took the example from the life which it is worthwhile imitating. I think, that it juz not our worry which are taking the place. If they were canceled from the earthly way, certainly God and Angels will take care so that it is an appropriate place. That now, is... smile, please, the father will see it, and he will be glad. You can believe me, I know what I am saying. Don't be sad. Greetings. Maria Barbara Korynt

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Catrina Heart 15 August 2009

lovely written profound craft...blissful thoughts about home for him...10+++

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Luwi Habte 15 August 2009

nice poem, well penned as usual Luwi

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Omar Ibrahim 15 August 2009

i want to live in the heaven......don't you?

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Marieta Maglas 15 August 2009

a wonderful poem, very well penned with deep thoughts............10+

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Obinna Eruchie 15 August 2009

Yes, there is heaven at home, if one is wise enought to learn to be true at heart by being open and sincere.

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Ruth Walters 15 August 2009

An interesting little theory...... Ruthy: 0)

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

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Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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