Sunday, September 21, 2008

A Homage Comments

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She comes with care, entwining night
With shining smiles. Her siren thighs
Hold close our need; within her light
All hope is mirrored; from her eyes
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Richard Blanch
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Callie Carroll 05 October 2008

Very fine and delicately communicated. I especially enjoyed '...hold close our need..', '...in gentle friendship's secret place...', and...'a dwelling sweet.'

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Anita Atina 25 September 2008

Lovely homage, so good to find a poem where there's enough meaning to read between the lines.

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