A Homage To D.H. Lawrence Comments

Thank you Akhtar for stopping by and creating new lines. I am glad it inspired you.

Lines from Gloire de Dijon In the window full of sunlight Concentrates her golden shadow Fold on fold, until it glows as Mellow as the glory roses. Beautiful poem, beautiful homage. well wrote Ravi Kopra.

My lines pale against the yellow roses, Against the glistening silver shoulders, Against the sluicing sounds Of rain disheveled petals. I desire now my day white lilies I feel this is your best poem, and makes me to write