I could not remain frozen on the hills
When the naughty sun kissed and touched me
I started melting in the sun's hot arms
I became ecstatic when the valley hugged me
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A river and its pathos.....deep in meaning....thank you Akhtarji
Valentine exists only through love. If there is hatred and violence, then the Valentine disappears. The holy river flows only through pure love. This poem is a lesson to all those who indulge in dreadful acts of violence and hatred. Thank you Akhtar Sahab for this poem. 10+
A sparkling poem Scintillating poetic imagination.... thanks for sharing...10
A thought provoking poem beautifully crafted. A compelling imagery.
Very different Valentine's day poem in the midst of violence and hate..Congratulations great work Aktarji
A beautiful poem. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you sir.