Wednesday, July 4, 2007

A Hole In The World Comments

Rating: 5.0

Man made destruction made a bullet size whole in the world,
The world is suffering from it's bullet wound,
Now a dark abyss lies in the whole
created by the seven deadly sins of man kind and it's only getting bigger,
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RyuOh Kenshin
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Blue Angel 17 August 2007

There Shall be a Miracle to Save it! AMEN.

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Monkey Mendez 08 July 2007

That was deep man. I loved it! You put so much passion in it and I couldn't take my eyes off this poem until I finished it. U sually, I just read every word and get it, but don't pay attention, but this, I really got into! Bravo RK

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purple moon 05 July 2007

very good Ryuoh, you have powerful feelings and passion about this subject......if only everyone had.........well done...

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