Wednesday, February 27, 2008

A Hole In The Wall (Fun Poem 66) Comments

Rating: 5.0

You walk beside a brick wall
always wondering what is on the other side.
As you move along a bit further
there is brick missing
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David Harris
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Meggie Gultiano 09 March 2008

what was there, David? do tell me please..this is our secret..he he

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Alison Cassidy 04 March 2008

Have you read 'Mr. Nosey'? It was one of my son's favorites. Whenever Mr. Nosey was nosey, his nose began to grow like Pinocchio's, and one day when he poked his nose into a hole in the fence, it was so long that someone on the other side accidentally hit it with a hammer. That taught Mr. Nosey a lesson. Thanks for reminding me. Fun poem. I enjoyed it. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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JoAnn McGrath 27 February 2008

oh now.....inquiring minds do want to know...you dirty dave....: O)

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C.R. Clark 27 February 2008

The last line is not all bad. You've allowed us all to participate by guessing what was there. A very shrewd move on your part and a great read. Thanks Richard

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