Saturday, June 23, 2007

A Hole In The Tree Comments

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There's a hole in the tree
outside
cross the street
from my sister's house
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Alicia Mogollón
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dream is wonderfully written as a poem and it is nice.

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Pilar Mogollon 10 October 2015

Thank you.

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Davidia Kartina 23 June 2007

wow your luck t have found that i once knew a tree that had a hole in it........, it waas dead sort of like how i felt at the time when i saw it (i was a bit dead in side) .., , ********** plz read and review my poems plz ******************

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Pilar Mogollon 10 October 2015

thank you Davidia. Yes, that is kind of how I felt also when I wrote the poem. Though the tree was not dead, I was at a pretty low point, hence my desire to climb in and stay.

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