Sunday, August 1, 2010

A Hole In The Roof Comments

Rating: 5.0

The old prison cell and there's no ceiling
And a hole in the roof.
The person in confinement
Who sees the night sky.
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nimal dunuhinga
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Brian Jani 10 July 2014

amazing topic that you touched on here, i bet every prisoner can relate to this one

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Matt Mooney 04 August 2010

A perfect atmosphere depicted here of loneliness and isolation. The poem has strong imagery and leaves one wondering if this is a real prison or simply a mirror of the human condition when one is left to live alone. Read my poem which is on a similar theme. It's entitled' Imagine If '.10.

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