A Hole Filled In Me Comments

nothing compares to the feeling to be filled by a person... I have been there and I miss it... lovely penned dear friend! thanks for sharing!

' ... is it just risk free'... 10... Tsira

I enjoyed this, a good, solid read. I loved your language in this stanza, Do you fit bettween the beat of my heart Has the stress from being there Torn you apart This was beautiful imagery, fitting between the beat of a heart, it just makes my own heart sing a bit. Now, this stanza had me thinking and puzzling a bit, Is love for purchase Could it be Or is it just risk free I always think of loving as one of the greatest risks you can take. And in some ways, not loving is another risk. But I never really think of love as risk free. So I liked that you took a different tact. It made me think and ponder, which I enjoy and I even suspect it is good for me. Peace, L&T

what an excellent read, loved it immensely. topten

Howard. You are doing good. Your thinking and feeling. Many of us do not know how. Fred

This is carefully structured, You have complimented my work, but I would ask you to take time in considering your own great pieces carefully This finely penned work, is yet another great, from you my friend Take care and have a great new-year Love duncan X

Great poem Howard. Ya gotta ten fro' thee kind sir. I used ta work for a Howard Johnson above a highway over pass serving food to customers at the Hinsdale Oasis. God bless all poets-MJG.

The add and the fixes make it so much better. Keep it up Howard you doing well. Patricia

The add and the fixes make it so much better. Keep it up Howard you doing well. Patricia

Very touching Howard. I don't believe love is ever risk free.......Great job! Sincerely, Mary

You felt this one deeply, Howard and it shows. Keep up the good work. Kind regards, Sandra

Hello, and since you asked, I will let you know what I think but by email, later today. Some typo's and such. Some lovely thoughts here.

Glad to see you back. Nice and deep Howard. Patricia