Friday, December 5, 2014

A History Of The Future Comments

Rating: 5.0

Maturity is increasing day by day,
Distances are decreasing day by day,
Friction that causes heat of the hate,
Evolution is greasing day by day.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 December 2014

Maturity is increasing day by day, Distances are decreasing day by day, Friction that causes heat of the hate, Evolution is greasing day by day.- - I like this stanza. Very nice beginning. Beautiful poem. Many thanks sir.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 05 December 2014

A disposition to look on the more favorable side of events or conditions and to expect the most favorable outcome ..............a great inspiring poem beautifully composed....10/10

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Savita Tyagi 05 December 2014

Thanks for the positive words. Enjoyed the poem.

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Salini Nair 05 December 2014

God asking Angels to defer destruction, To wait and see for man's construction, .....beautiful poem

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 December 2014

Great work! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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