Glaedr the poet

Glaedr the poet

Born in California but my 'Homeland' will always be Missouri
Tuesday, May 9, 2006

A History Of Dragons Comments

Rating: 4.6

The mighty wings of the chosen
The mighty dragons long forgotten
Above all creatures do they tower
There lies within them limitless power
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Glaedr the poet
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Greenwolfe 1962 11 June 2008

There is so much to say that is good about this poem, that I should probably just comment on what I didn't like. The only thing I didn't like was the structural manner in which it was presented. I thought a more poetic looking structure might add something to it. But hey! This is in every aspect a superior creation of a creative mind, and so maybe I'm wrong. GW62

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purple moon 28 June 2007

I LOVE DRAGONS. WELL DONE X

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Ivor Hogg 18 September 2006

Enjoyed your dragon poem but felt the rhyme was a little forced in places and the inversion are a bit off putting Hope you don't mind honesty ivor

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Glaedr the poet

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Born in California but my 'Homeland' will always be Missouri
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