The mighty wings of the chosen
The mighty dragons long forgotten
Above all creatures do they tower
There lies within them limitless power
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Enjoyed your dragon poem but felt the rhyme was a little forced in places and the inversion are a bit off putting Hope you don't mind honesty ivor
There is so much to say that is good about this poem, that I should probably just comment on what I didn't like. The only thing I didn't like was the structural manner in which it was presented. I thought a more poetic looking structure might add something to it. But hey! This is in every aspect a superior creation of a creative mind, and so maybe I'm wrong. GW62