Saturday, October 19, 2019

A Hill Train To Change Land Comments

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A change seems hard first-hand,
Messy in the mid bend—
Train on hilly terrain
Runs zigzag, no straight lane,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Kostas Lagos 19 October 2019

Limericks are not always slap-stick, nor are used only for pulling legs. They have a potential for conveying a serious message as well. And you've done it exceptionally!

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 October 2019

Thank you dear Kostas Lagos, I havw penned limericks for their original purpose, but more for conveying serious thoughts. I'm glad you agree with me. But I love your limericks no less.

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Godhra - Gujarat
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