A Hill And A Cloud Comments

A magnificent poem with captivating imagery! Beautifully composed dear madam....top score

" Bursts out to mesmerizes all." i suggest " ..out and mesmerizes.." OR " ..to mesmerize.." . :) " To keep the beloveds apart." i suggest a comma, not a period. What! ? Savita, you Romantic, you! ! ! are you trying to compete for poetic greatness with the likes of Valsa, and, of course, MEEe? a great poem, though i could find little 'wrong' with it. darn! ! to MyPoemList. bri :)

A fascinating poem embellished in elegant poetic expression Thanks for sharing dear madam

A beautiful union of hill and cloud presented very well. Hill's gaze as always Fixed upon its vanishing love waiting for the love to return. Beautiful poem. Loved reading it.

The loving embrace of the hill and cloud when seen with poetic eyes has turned into a celestial experience! This union has indeed mesmerized the readers! A great poem, Savita! Thanks for your Easter Greetings! Wish you too the joy and hope, Easter gives!

What a beautiful poem on earthly love of the mountain peak with the rainy clouds describing the detailed sentiments of both. I specially love the lines, Hill's gaze as always Fixed upon its vanishing love Waiting, enduring, longing Such is their love's destiny Thank you for sharing Savita