Saturday, May 26, 2012

A Higher Being Comments

Rating: 4.6

If you believe in a higher being
And you know he sees it all
You go forward wth a confidence
Whether you rise or fall
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Vanessa Hughes
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Tom Allport 09 May 2017

a beautifully written poem of believing in something else? if true it would make the world in which we now live in a much better place! ..............well penned.

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 August 2015

If you believe in not hurting Any living thing A path towards enlightenment Is what that journey brings.. i have heard Hindu Gurus preaching such ideas of enlightenment. no hurting, a life of love, and mercy to all living beings will lead you to Enlightenment. thank you dear poetess for presenting these ideas.

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Leslie Sharp 24 October 2014

Beautiful well put I believe the same and no one could ever take that belief from me. They might take all else in this earthly world but not that

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 21 August 2014

profound, thanks for sharing

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C. P. Sharma 27 July 2014

Superb and comprehensive treatment of the a higher being in a well structured poem. It seems to be creation of a scholarly mind. I love it.

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Sarojkanta Dash 22 June 2014

loved the poem. a genuine human approach.

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Abhipsa Tripathy 01 June 2014

Hello! poet Vanessa Yes, you are write we should go forward with confidence without caring we will rise or fall. Please read my poems.

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Tanya Gupta 30 March 2014

loved all your lines, they are very inspirational and when comes in reading i leaves a very relaxfull relief.... very much enjoyed your rhymes and lines. please come to my page and read my poems.they too have rhymes and i hope you'll come and will enjoy them.

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Charles Monroe 16 March 2014

Amen my Sister from another Mister.

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V P Mahur 05 March 2014

Dear Vanessa Your poem reminds of Rudyard Kipling Very nicely written. Full of moral I invite you to come and read my poems and leave some views of yours.

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Jon M. Nelson 27 January 2014

We'll all eventually be judged in the end, So it all depends on the message we send.

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Md Elias Uddin 31 December 2013

If you believe in a higher being And you know he sees it all You go forward wth a confidence Whether you rise or fall ABSOLUTELY RIGHT!

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Rajesh Thankappan 22 December 2013

Belief in God is a catalyst which can lead us to get some understanding of the supreme being. I also invite you to read some of my latest poems.

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Kanav Justa 08 November 2013

Loved the last four lines of the poem.... wise words

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C. P. Sharma 20 October 2013

It's the karmic cycle that takes us all around and finally when the desires fulfilled, salvation is found. A great philosophical poem. I love it.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 09 August 2013

A nice positive poem I like it

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 07 July 2013

I dont believe in reincarnation but i likd yor poem esp d beginning stanzas they r awesome! Pls do review my latest too.

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Indranil Bhaduri 22 June 2013

Fantastic penning maam..you are one opf the most powerful writers in PH.

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Payal Parande 15 June 2013

A poet's work is to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world, and stop it going to sleep. Salman Rushdie you must have waken many people from their sleep.....bravo ma'am

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Amira Remadna 03 June 2013

The poem was written from the bottom of your heart that's why it's special, by the way i love it A powerful message

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