If you believe in a higher being
And you know he sees it all
You go forward wth a confidence
Whether you rise or fall
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If you believe in not hurting Any living thing A path towards enlightenment Is what that journey brings.. i have heard Hindu Gurus preaching such ideas of enlightenment. no hurting, a life of love, and mercy to all living beings will lead you to Enlightenment. thank you dear poetess for presenting these ideas.
Beautiful well put I believe the same and no one could ever take that belief from me. They might take all else in this earthly world but not that
Superb and comprehensive treatment of the a higher being in a well structured poem. It seems to be creation of a scholarly mind. I love it.
Hello! poet Vanessa Yes, you are write we should go forward with confidence without caring we will rise or fall. Please read my poems.
loved all your lines, they are very inspirational and when comes in reading i leaves a very relaxfull relief.... very much enjoyed your rhymes and lines. please come to my page and read my poems.they too have rhymes and i hope you'll come and will enjoy them.
Dear Vanessa Your poem reminds of Rudyard Kipling Very nicely written. Full of moral I invite you to come and read my poems and leave some views of yours.
We'll all eventually be judged in the end, So it all depends on the message we send.
If you believe in a higher being And you know he sees it all You go forward wth a confidence Whether you rise or fall ABSOLUTELY RIGHT!
Belief in God is a catalyst which can lead us to get some understanding of the supreme being. I also invite you to read some of my latest poems.
It's the karmic cycle that takes us all around and finally when the desires fulfilled, salvation is found. A great philosophical poem. I love it.
I dont believe in reincarnation but i likd yor poem esp d beginning stanzas they r awesome! Pls do review my latest too.
Fantastic penning maam..you are one opf the most powerful writers in PH.
A poet's work is to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world, and stop it going to sleep. Salman Rushdie you must have waken many people from their sleep.....bravo ma'am
The poem was written from the bottom of your heart that's why it's special, by the way i love it A powerful message
a beautifully written poem of believing in something else? if true it would make the world in which we now live in a much better place! ..............well penned.