A Hidden Treasure! Comments

Yes, you are very right. She should captivate goodness and beauty. With time she will be cherished and flourished. This poem is an excellent poem...10

Wonderful poem! No matter what she saw or thought of herself, you found and fell in love with the beauty of her soul and cherished her. Sounds like a great beginning for romance. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

I liked that, the poem is easy to read and easy to get, with a claire meaning. hey, take a loot at my poem 'Even if I'm out of town' if time! Maja Vestad

I love this one. It speaks to a truth I have seen for so many years. It speaks to me in ways I smile when I still see it.

beautiful poem...luvd it.!

Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder... any being captivated and falls in love sees through the heart! Well pened Michael, I can relate to it. Top marks.

Really beautiful. Makes me belive in beauty once again. Really lovely poem. Keep on going /Agnes

I believe you will! Beautiful thoughts here Michael, lovely poem. All the best, Diane

Michael this is charming piece, and sooooooooooo true. Mum used to say during the Second World War many of the army nurses serving overseas that had been regarded as too 'plain' for partners, flowered when the ratio of men to women became 1000 to 1. Beauty is indeed in the eye of the beholder and your eye is a gentle one. love, Allie xxxx

I really hate how society has dicated on what is desirable and we are governed by it. There is so much more to people than external looks, but when you say that, it's now considered cliche.