Sunday, February 11, 2007

A Hidden Girl Comments

Rating: 4.8

Afraid of seeing herself,
She hides from the sunlight,
Avoids mirrors, lingers in shadows,
And only walks the streets after midnight.
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Uriah Hamilton
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Ana Monnar 13 September 2007

There are many hidden people due to fear. Great poem. A 10 from me.

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 19 February 2007

Wow.... That poem was so strong and sad... Good work. Smiles N Hugs Rissa: -)

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Sandra Fowler 17 February 2007

You have achieved a wonderful empathy with this girl who walks in the shadows. Tender write, Uriah. Warm regards, Sandra

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Alarm bells ringing... beautifully written, poignant message sweetheart. t x

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Alison Cassidy 11 February 2007

Uriah, this one reminds me of Laura in Tennessee Williams' the Glass Menagerie. So painfully shy that she hides from life with her flat chest and her built up boot. A sad and beautifully drawn portrait of fear and loneliness. love, Allie xxxx

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 11 February 2007

Perhaps a more contemporary definition of the proverbial Wall Flower & very eloquently detailed & constructed by a very talented quiller... F.J.R.

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Alison Smith 11 February 2007

A heartfelt verse of a soul lost in mistaken belief.... Alison

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