A Hidden Girl Comments
Afraid of seeing herself,
She hides from the sunlight,
Avoids mirrors, lingers in shadows,
And only walks the streets after midnight.
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Wow.... That poem was so strong and sad... Good work. Smiles N Hugs Rissa: -)
You have achieved a wonderful empathy with this girl who walks in the shadows. Tender write, Uriah. Warm regards, Sandra
Alarm bells ringing... beautifully written, poignant message sweetheart. t x
Uriah, this one reminds me of Laura in Tennessee Williams' the Glass Menagerie. So painfully shy that she hides from life with her flat chest and her built up boot. A sad and beautifully drawn portrait of fear and loneliness. love, Allie xxxx
Perhaps a more contemporary definition of the proverbial Wall Flower & very eloquently detailed & constructed by a very talented quiller... F.J.R.
A heartfelt verse of a soul lost in mistaken belief.... Alison
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7/24/2025 5:23:04 PM # 1.0.0
There are many hidden people due to fear. Great poem. A 10 from me.