A Hero Is One Who Falls Asleep With His Shoes On Comments

Or does life just go on for them the same as we. Read mine - Frustrated Plans - Adeline

The title itself says it all 'One Who Falls Asleep With His Shoes On'. Thanks for this amazing poem which also reminds us that 'No might of man may outlast Death'.

A well thought out poem. Enjoyed reading it. The flow was amazing.

Enjoyed your poem about heroes and their vulnerability in life. The too have haunting dreams and shadows. Good write.

I like this poem very much. The opening line draws you in and then starts you thinking about heroes and their vulnerability.

A truly outstanding poem, every thrilling exquisite word a worthy 10

No might of man may outlast Death. true nice poem

Outstanding Poem. Thoughtful and significant. I've translated this poem into Bengali for our Bangadeshi readers who like to read world poetry in our mother language.

Life's thirsty hands. Nice work.

Beautiful poem. Splendid one. Thanks for the sharing.

Indeed where is the time time for the hero to dream about anything but to lay down his body on bed and sleep without removing his shoes?

I would say a perfect poem + ingenuity in verses!

not really a perfect poem there are lines that show your ingenuity in verses. keep on wes.

What Mr Sands said. t x

Your language in this poem is so exacte, it paints seuch a picture. It really is a beautiful poem. You've really got a great talent, never doubt that. Thank you for your words. /Agnes