A Hero In The Ordinary World Comments

a greatkob, but notlike you at all, nice change in style, everyone needs that once in a while

A lovely composition. 10 for it.

Wow, I read this and my mouth literally dropped. I love this poem and gave it a 10. If there was an number high it certainly would have deserved it. In, poems there's always one main thing that stands out to me and in this poem I loved the lines: 'Save the world, and be a change. You watch the world like TV. Not liking the show, But too lazy to reach for the remote.' Reminds me of how people want to see a change, but are too lazy to do anything about it. Absolutely wonderful Brittany!

wow this is good. i like it