A Herd Of Black Dots Comments

it's a shame you really tried but failed. Honestly pathetic (sean de Montfort) I KNOW WHERE YOU LIVE

A FAST-PACED, BUT WELL CONSTRUCTED SOJOURN OF EMOTION GOING ON HERE....A LOT OF TRAFFIC, BUT YOU POLICE IT WELL, KEEP TH' SEQUENCING MOVING, AND W/ A SMACK OF VERVE THROUGHOUT...I LIKE THIS PIECE, NATHAN, AS WELL AS THE TITLE...KUDOS! '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''F j R

i kinda like this! ! not too heavy on the rhymes, it is. SusxGLx