Saturday, August 16, 2008

A Helpless Heart Comments

Rating: 3.2

I say hi to everybody
When I start to depart!
It is when my sunflower
Kindly Tears me apart
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE
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Rachel Butler 04 November 2009

'I say hi to everybody' Rachel Ann Butler

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anne adam 03 September 2009

i love it keep goin the good work

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Emma Adamyan 19 June 2009

I liked it A LOT. a simple poem with the deep meaning. im sure its all a good poem needs. bravo

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Shashendra Amalshan 23 May 2009

short..indeed...infact your heart must be quite strong...cos my one is all fragile...i m like down and out...wonder wen it's gona crack...thank nighingale 10+++ regards

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 22 April 2009

ur heart is not helpless.. it is amazing! the poem is too and the poet as well! excellent work my friend

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Jihad T 17 January 2009

i like poems which has nature i like the way u wrote it 10 for this

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Patricia Bankhead 19 September 2008

It's good to have a kind heart. Great write! Pat~

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Evaughn Gray 25 August 2008

short but very sweet and welcoming. it was a good poem i really liked this one! ~Hazel G.E.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 19 August 2008

COOOOOOOOOOLLLL sathya narayana

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, aryaindia 19 August 2008

You have opened up your helpless heart and it shall never be helpless hereafter. arya

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anne adam 18 August 2008

cool poems u rock i love it

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Thad Wilk 16 August 2008

A lovely read Shiraz! Your kindness seems to work, for everyone. But your sunflower it seems that she is In need - of more sun! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 16 August 2008

this injury to the heart has no medicine. the cure is.....to share another heart with someone special.nice piece bro.

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C T Heart 16 August 2008

a warm heart for everyone........nice usage of word like sunflower...10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 16 August 2008

oh! I am touched by this poem........10

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Tanya Stanford 16 August 2008

Simple sweet but very effective well done

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Samantha Guinen 16 August 2008

I get it its deep and short

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