I say hi to everybody
When I start to depart!
It is when my sunflower
Kindly Tears me apart
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I liked it A LOT. a simple poem with the deep meaning. im sure its all a good poem needs. bravo
short..indeed...infact your heart must be quite strong...cos my one is all fragile...i m like down and out...wonder wen it's gona crack...thank nighingale 10+++ regards
ur heart is not helpless.. it is amazing! the poem is too and the poet as well! excellent work my friend
i like poems which has nature i like the way u wrote it 10 for this
short but very sweet and welcoming. it was a good poem i really liked this one! ~Hazel G.E.
You have opened up your helpless heart and it shall never be helpless hereafter. arya
A lovely read Shiraz! Your kindness seems to work, for everyone. But your sunflower it seems that she is In need - of more sun! *10*! ! Friend Thad
this injury to the heart has no medicine. the cure is.....to share another heart with someone special.nice piece bro.
a warm heart for everyone........nice usage of word like sunflower...10
'I say hi to everybody' Rachel Ann Butler