Wednesday, September 2, 2015

A Hell Turned Paradise Comments

Rating: 5.0

My beloved
I always remember
Once my soul
Had taken a ride
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Alem Hailu Gabre Kristos
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Chinedu Dike 28 March 2020

A poignant reflection elegantly crafted with clarity of thought and mind. A passionate piece with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Alem.

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Amelia Cavazos 01 July 2016

It is written nicely, and I love the meaning behind the words. Turning something so heart wrenching into something so equally heart wrenching, it isn't easy. Beautiful work.

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Alem Hailu G/kristos 02 September 2015

Thank you A close friend of mine suffered a lot. Living abroad he invested his time and money on his girl who was not faithful.He missed so many honest girls in the mean time

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Muhammad Imtiyaz 02 September 2015

very true...well crafted piece.

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Pijush Biswas 02 September 2015

Here a lover's little depression is revealed. the poem is written quite well. like this thanks

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Alem Hailu G/kristos 02 September 2015

Thank you a close friend of mine suffered a lot. Living abroad he invested his time and money on his girl who was not faithful.He missed so many honest girls in the mean time SPT

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