I had a thought, that if I got to Heaven
And knocked on the 'pearly gates' at seven,
St Peter would say ' Hold it there'
We haven't got a place to spare,
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Lovely, light and humorous poem. Put a smile on my face. Thank you!
What a inspirational poem, heaven is Real. A place of eternity. More grace.
An outstanding poetess, your words and wisdom within your fine writing is remarkable, what a perfect description of the place we all hold so dear to us. Thank you for sharing all the very best jon
An interesting poem about going the heaven. I enjoyed reading this superb write.
What a wonderful way to transition through to Heaven... if we must wait... Thank you
I love this poem, we all better get practising! Andrew x
Ernestine- Thank you for your kind comments and I am glad you were touched by 'even the angels cried'. I am sorry to hear of your loss, you must miss your husband terribly. I really loved what you wrote here and can't wait to read more. -shannon
What a delightful poem, Ernestine! We have absolutely no idea what awaits us down the road and this IS a possibility. Such fun your poem was! Marilyn
I shall book harp lessons right away loved the pawky humour M lady
A quirky and lighthearted look at the afterlife... cute and very clever, Ernestine! ! Brian
A cute take on the traditional view, Ernestine. Thanks for the smile! Esther : ]
I think with the 'pearly' words of your poems, you shall be admitted straightaway. A tender poem.
Here's hoping that a rhyming troubadour counts as a 'harpist' because we make music in our own way. How funny to think of 'taking a seat and waiting! ' You've had a stray thought that turned out to be so funny. Linda
I have just read 'A Heavenly Thought'. It's like a soft breeze!
My Daughter Kimberley plays the harp And you play the poem beautifully Much Love Duncan
A very enjoyable poem to read; thanks for posting.