Wednesday, February 7, 2007

A Heavenly Story Comments

Rating: 4.6

I can see through your eyes
A heaven now and holy love will flow
no one can see you now
not awaits the dark side of you,
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Thampi KEE
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Marydel Cranzo 04 May 2015

well done, sir! , nice poem.

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Marydel Cranzo 04 May 2015

wonderful composition :)

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 02 August 2012

datz...........z..... actually like a suspense love story....................

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Lawrence H 20 March 2012

Kee, Your poem is good, but still unsure what are you trying to portray about heavenly story?

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Miriam Maia Padua 02 November 2011

you write so well... hope to read your new poems soon... do write new poems..your readers are waiting, I know..

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Miriam Maia Padua 02 November 2011

you write so well... hope to read your new poems soon... do write new poems..your readers are waiting, I know..

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Rekha Mandagere 24 June 2011

Nice tribute to Helen.Lovely poem. Great sentiments. thanks for share.

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Hribhu Dey 15 May 2011

Hey dear I was into a world of real love...beautifully written.....ENJOYED READING...RHYTHMIC AND GOOD PACE PLZ READ MY POEM 'play and win' AND LEAVE A COMMENT PLZ, THANKS

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Kesav Easwaran 12 May 2011

good read Thampi...thanks for sharing

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Sayeed Abubakar 21 April 2011

Fantastic. Superb. Discovering divine love demands a divine mind.

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Ezna Stephna 26 March 2011

Superb...... lovely poem with beautiful words used in line.......great.

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Geetima Baruah Sarma 19 March 2011

Beautiful one with a nice title.

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An enjoyable read! All are beautiful in His sight, Lovely; D

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Lynn Glover 22 June 2010

Good poem and very good description of love intermingled with heavenly ways. A good write. Lynn

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Malaya Roses 14 June 2010

love shall put no veils in between and as the ultimate trophy is pureness n sincere heart to each other. Love is divine. Love is life; keep it that way. well done.

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Preetam Shetty 19 May 2010

You rightly compared love to divinity......while making your point that Love does not care about looks

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Leila Taghavi 11 March 2010

Nice written poem! Thanks so much for reading 'poeverty' too.

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Rachel Butler 04 November 2009

'We made it now' Rachel Ann Butler

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Marieta Maglas 26 August 2009

wonderful poem, very well written............10

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Bhaswat Chakraborty 18 August 2009

The theme is excellent, the composition is also very interesting.

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