I can see through your eyes
A heaven now and holy love will flow
no one can see you now
not awaits the dark side of you,
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datz...........z..... actually like a suspense love story....................
Kee, Your poem is good, but still unsure what are you trying to portray about heavenly story?
you write so well... hope to read your new poems soon... do write new poems..your readers are waiting, I know..
you write so well... hope to read your new poems soon... do write new poems..your readers are waiting, I know..
Nice tribute to Helen.Lovely poem. Great sentiments. thanks for share.
Hey dear I was into a world of real love...beautifully written.....ENJOYED READING...RHYTHMIC AND GOOD PACE PLZ READ MY POEM 'play and win' AND LEAVE A COMMENT PLZ, THANKS
Fantastic. Superb. Discovering divine love demands a divine mind.
Superb...... lovely poem with beautiful words used in line.......great.
An enjoyable read! All are beautiful in His sight, Lovely; D
Good poem and very good description of love intermingled with heavenly ways. A good write. Lynn
love shall put no veils in between and as the ultimate trophy is pureness n sincere heart to each other. Love is divine. Love is life; keep it that way. well done.
You rightly compared love to divinity......while making your point that Love does not care about looks
The theme is excellent, the composition is also very interesting.
well done, sir! , nice poem.