I can see through your eyes
A heaven now and holy love will flow
no one can see you now
not awaits the dark side of you,
they say not a clown
the girl she looks not a cute
I guess they are not mad like me
just a stranger
look a friend in this heaven
I never say no
you know I never make jokes
we made it now
helen, the heaven you makes here
The theme is excellent, the composition is also very interesting.
datz...........z..... actually like a suspense love story....................
Kee, Your poem is good, but still unsure what are you trying to portray about heavenly story?
you write so well... hope to read your new poems soon... do write new poems..your readers are waiting, I know..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You rightly compared love to divinity......while making your point that Love does not care about looks