A Heavenly Story Poem by Thampi KEE

A Heavenly Story

Rating: 4.6


I can see through your eyes
A heaven now and holy love will flow
no one can see you now
not awaits the dark side of you,


they say not a clown
the girl she looks not a cute
I guess they are not mad like me
just a stranger
look a friend in this heaven

I never say no
you know I never make jokes
we made it now
helen, the heaven you makes here

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Preetam Shetty 19 May 2010

You rightly compared love to divinity......while making your point that Love does not care about looks

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Leila Taghavi 11 March 2010

Nice written poem! Thanks so much for reading 'poeverty' too.

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Rachel Butler 04 November 2009

'We made it now' Rachel Ann Butler

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Marieta Maglas 26 August 2009

wonderful poem, very well written............10

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Bhaswat Chakraborty 18 August 2009

The theme is excellent, the composition is also very interesting.

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Marydel Cranzo 04 May 2015

well done, sir! , nice poem.

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Marydel Cranzo 04 May 2015

wonderful composition :)

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 02 August 2012

datz...........z..... actually like a suspense love story....................

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Lawrence H 20 March 2012

Kee, Your poem is good, but still unsure what are you trying to portray about heavenly story?

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Miriam Maia Padua 02 November 2011

you write so well... hope to read your new poems soon... do write new poems..your readers are waiting, I know..

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