Tuesday, November 4, 2008

A Heavenly Kid And Me..... Comments

Rating: 4.9

A pleasant morning it was
with mountains still covered with curtain of snow
under cool breeze with fingers in my pocket
was walking admiring the nature bit slow
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Sebastine Humaemo
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Obed Souza 17 July 2009

Great poem! Wonderful images. Nice doing!

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Miriam Maia Padua 23 May 2009

wow...wonderful work..really a very lovely poem... such a wonderful and beautiful picture flashed before me while reading this great imaginations being shared... this piece has life...very visible descriptions..really great.... 10+++++

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 26 January 2009

a lovely story..a divine young girl...a story in words with a lot of pictures

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Genesis Learny 15 January 2009

as i read this poem i can visualize what im hearing and thats how you know its a good poem.NICE JOB!

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Young One 12 January 2009

it's like a story a friend told me once, very riviting.

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Marria Attar 11 January 2009

very nice poem...beautifully written!

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Vaibhav Pandey 05 January 2009

very beautiful my friend...

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Winnie Angel 27 December 2008

a nice and trully beautiful poem....i liked the thought in it.. Winnie

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Nia Riz 23 December 2008

how beautifully you have written these lines...as you compare each and everything to a beaufty of life, you make it look realistic...i love the last line where she asks you to come and play along... a very beautiful poem sebastine... Nia

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premji premji 05 November 2008

beautiful lines.. enjoyed

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