A pleasant morning it was
with mountains still covered with curtain of snow
under cool breeze with fingers in my pocket
was walking admiring the nature bit slow
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wow...wonderful work..really a very lovely poem... such a wonderful and beautiful picture flashed before me while reading this great imaginations being shared... this piece has life...very visible descriptions..really great.... 10+++++
a lovely story..a divine young girl...a story in words with a lot of pictures
as i read this poem i can visualize what im hearing and thats how you know its a good poem.NICE JOB!
a nice and trully beautiful poem....i liked the thought in it.. Winnie
how beautifully you have written these lines...as you compare each and everything to a beaufty of life, you make it look realistic...i love the last line where she asks you to come and play along... a very beautiful poem sebastine... Nia
Great poem! Wonderful images. Nice doing!