A Heavenly Date Comments

Wonderfully written! A clear vision of complete surrender! BUT... dear, do it please after the matrimonial vow! REGARDS...

virginity is a treasure shouldn`t be given away to someone that his love in your heart wont stay dont make love unless its done the right way because doing it lose your love you may wait for the moment you find your soulmate then go out with him in a heavenly date..........dear it is so lovely ppresentation..... easy to understand and very simple language..... why compromisoe virginity when not sure of honesty... oh, so nicely worded poem.....10 read mine browneyes and two bright eyes too....

like i so agree to keep your self for someone who love you must don't just throw it all away like that

What a beautiful romantic poem, and old fashioned in its composition. I love it. 10 Karin Anderson

What a beautiful romantic poem, and old fashioned in its composition. I love it. 10 Karin Anderson

Very lovely poem.

this is my favorite of all your poems..

That was.. indescribably awesome! ! Great idea and amazing words

wow wow... its so good.. i wish that i had thought of something that good lol... it is most delightful to read. and a pleasure to poetry. wow wow wow

this is amazing! ive never heard of virginity put into this perspective. its great

virginity is a treasure shouldn`t be given away to someone that his love in your heart wont stay so... so true. this is one of the best poems I have read all week. truly a piece of art. great job. Becca

Hi Blue eyes! A very conservative thinking in this day! But you've raison, love is the most important thing in our life. Congratulations my young boy!

Oh my god! ! hahaha really awesome poem love love it.: P

wow! wow! i really love this.. especially this part, virginity is a treasure shouldn`t be given away to someone that his love in your heart wont stay.. hmmm.100% agree, it's everyone's sacred temple.. thnks for sharing this.. thumbs up! !

Good write! I indeed enjoy it.

how lovely romantic it is..when his falls in hers..with no sins........so beautiful.

Sensuous and scintillating, yet with a very good message. I liked this soooo much.10+++++ sathya narayana

This is a wonderful message to spread around to the younger generation. Very good! Keep writing and sharing with us! Best Wishes, Marilyn

Well penned. I enjoyed reading your poem. Virginity is a treasure and a valuble gift to the man that woman spends her life with.

This was a charming read. It had rhyme and some rhythm as well. That made it easy to read a nd that helps the reader focus on the meaning as well. It was very well done by the writer. GW62