*a Heavenly Cocoon On Earth (Dedicated To My Mother) Comments

What a lovely tribute to the most wonderful creation of Almighty! ! ! Thanks for sharing :)

a beautiful, true and sincere poem..very well expressed

For the love of your mother such a beautiful poem. To me it expresses the very essence of a mother, to love, protect and dream of a better future for her child.

this is very well written, good imagery, well-constructed. These are my favorite lines: 'And weaves dreams For me Beyond her life.' They have resonance beyond the words, deeper, very beautifully put. When you have an ending that strong, it lifts the whole poem to another level.

And weaves dreams For me Beyond her life..................A wonderful tribute by a wonderful son............

A beautiful poem about transformation and the unconditional devotion of motherhood. The caterpillar of your today becomes the butterfly of your tomorrows. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

A wonderful poem for your mother on mothers day, well penned, 10 Lynda xx

A wonderful title for your poem, with your continuing theme weaving your Mother's love, protection and aspirations for her beloved Sameer. 10 Karin Anderson

good Mother's Day poem, Sameer...i liked the sensitive attachment and affection it carries inside...10

A lovely Mother's Day gift. Words are imperishable. Your last line is very profound. Take care. Warm regards, Sandra

Perfect words to the poet's mother, and to all the Mothers of this world who have made it possible for you and me to say it is possible. Great moment of introspection!

Realy great Sameer......Very happy to read it. Great tribute to pure love. May Allah bless your mother long life with best health and may you love her every moment of your life. Ayya Aappi

great sameer...a true and touching ode to any mother nice job there are a zillion ways one can think of ones mother but it comes down to tender unasuming love that demands nothing in return an wishes to give every thing.. what a phenomenon...? amazing you did a nise small piece...great cheers

a very nice dedication to your mother..belated greetings for your mother dear little one..always love her, she knows best next to GOD, , .your poem for her is very nice..i'll include this in my fav..naizz

Nicely done with a good choice of selective words. I like the combination of all the c words.

Beautiful tribute to your dear Mom - I like the imagery that you use to describe how she shields you....10+

lovely tribute to your mom wish her from me A HAPPY MOTHERS DAY -10 anjali

Any mother would be pleased to accept the unconditional tribute. Thank you.

A mothers Love - there is none more pure, unconditional. A wonderful poem for a Mother much loved.Cindy

a heartfelt true poem for your mother on this warm day, excellent one