Shielding me
From vulnerability outside
By ethereal cloche
She enshrouds me
In her protective envelop
Like a cocoon
Wrapping a larva
Through metamorphosis
She assembles comforts
Cultivates happiness
And weaves dreams
For me
Beyond her life.
(10 - 05 - 2009)
A wonderful poem for your mother on mothers day, well penned, 10 Lynda xx
A wonderful title for your poem, with your continuing theme weaving your Mother's love, protection and aspirations for her beloved Sameer. 10 Karin Anderson
good Mother's Day poem, Sameer...i liked the sensitive attachment and affection it carries inside...10
A lovely Mother's Day gift. Words are imperishable. Your last line is very profound. Take care. Warm regards, Sandra
What a lovely tribute to the most wonderful creation of Almighty! ! ! Thanks for sharing :)
a beautiful, true and sincere poem..very well expressed
For the love of your mother such a beautiful poem. To me it expresses the very essence of a mother, to love, protect and dream of a better future for her child.
this is very well written, good imagery, well-constructed. These are my favorite lines: 'And weaves dreams For me Beyond her life.' They have resonance beyond the words, deeper, very beautifully put. When you have an ending that strong, it lifts the whole poem to another level.
And weaves dreams For me Beyond her life..................A wonderful tribute by a wonderful son............
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A beautiful poem about transformation and the unconditional devotion of motherhood. The caterpillar of your today becomes the butterfly of your tomorrows. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥