*a Heavenly Cocoon On Earth (Dedicated To My Mother) Poem by Sameer Ahmed

*a Heavenly Cocoon On Earth (Dedicated To My Mother)

Rating: 4.1


Shielding me
From vulnerability outside
By ethereal cloche
She enshrouds me
In her protective envelop
Like a cocoon
Wrapping a larva
Through metamorphosis
She assembles comforts
Cultivates happiness
And weaves dreams
For me
Beyond her life.



(10 - 05 - 2009)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 12 May 2009

A beautiful poem about transformation and the unconditional devotion of motherhood. The caterpillar of your today becomes the butterfly of your tomorrows. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Lynda Robson 12 May 2009

A wonderful poem for your mother on mothers day, well penned, 10 Lynda xx

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A wonderful title for your poem, with your continuing theme weaving your Mother's love, protection and aspirations for her beloved Sameer. 10 Karin Anderson

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Kesav Easwaran 12 May 2009

good Mother's Day poem, Sameer...i liked the sensitive attachment and affection it carries inside...10

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Sandra Fowler 11 May 2009

A lovely Mother's Day gift. Words are imperishable. Your last line is very profound. Take care. Warm regards, Sandra

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June30 Tara 30 June 2009

What a lovely tribute to the most wonderful creation of Almighty! ! ! Thanks for sharing :)

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a beautiful, true and sincere poem..very well expressed

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Christopher Flynn 15 June 2009

For the love of your mother such a beautiful poem. To me it expresses the very essence of a mother, to love, protect and dream of a better future for her child.

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Lillian Thomas 08 June 2009

this is very well written, good imagery, well-constructed. These are my favorite lines: 'And weaves dreams For me Beyond her life.' They have resonance beyond the words, deeper, very beautifully put. When you have an ending that strong, it lifts the whole poem to another level.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 12 May 2009

And weaves dreams For me Beyond her life..................A wonderful tribute by a wonderful son............

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