Thursday, January 25, 2007

A Heaven I Miss Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sweet smell of burnt bushes and baked earth
still lingers in the memory though bygone in history
am awakened from the slumber’s depth
to the musical memory from the past gone by;
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Anjana Asok 09 August 2008

Really nice poem.I was touched by your feelings towards your mother land. Keep up the good work, uncle....Hope someday I too can write like you..........

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Qistina Zaini 01 October 2007

great, great poem do you live in perak?

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Melvina Germain 20 May 2007

A beautiful picture perfect poem, I thoroughly enjoyed the read right to the end, truly an amazing poem. Thanks for sharing---Melvina---

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Mary Das 04 February 2007

A good one my fren.

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Sandra Fowler 27 January 2007

A fine word painting of a memory kept within the confines of a poem. The last lines are especially touching. Warm regards, Sandra

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