Monday, September 22, 2008

A Heartbreaker Comments

Rating: 3.0

A heartbreaker manipulates and also deceives.
They whisper sweet nothings while your heart bleeds.
You do everything and anything to try and make it work
For he is a heartbreaker; another beautiful jerk.
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Sharon Goodwin
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David Desantis 03 October 2008

I wish i could say i wasn't guilty of this...but i think we are all heartbreakers in some ways...and all get our heart broken as well....love is unequal in most cases....great poem though, i like your style!

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Anand Dixit 23 September 2008

The mind knows it will be deceived, the heart know it will be broken, yet the attraction. Like moths get attracted to flames. Excellent, this deserves a 10.

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Linda Moore 22 September 2008

I think you described Heart breakers to a tee. Well written......10

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Dr.subhendu Kar 22 September 2008

They whisper sweet nothings while your heart bleeds.......... heartyet knows where it comes from, nobusiness please.........wonderful thougt by the imagery, ilike it,10+, thanks for sharing

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Chris Newlash 22 September 2008

Great poem, read some of mine I think you might like them!

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Sharon Goodwin

Sharon Goodwin

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