Saturday, January 24, 2009

A Heartbeat Away Comments

Rating: 4.5

It seems like an eternity since I last saw you
But somehow I have barely made it through
Through the suffering and pain
As I fall in the dirt in the rain
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Yassar Ali
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Ro'ya Abdulaal 19 April 2010

Simply amazing, I love your choice of words, heartbreaking tone and the rythm, again well done

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Allemagne Roßmann 14 February 2010

Then in honour to you I will take bow But that’s not a very long time from now....coz.thats this...thisz now. 10++++

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a true beautuiful passionated write..excellent one and enjoyed it//10+++++

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Anjali Sinha 06 February 2009

'My special shining star Just give me a sign Or else I will resign ' These last few words touchhhhhhhhhhhhed me lovely! ! ! ! ! ! ! -10 anjali

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