Monday, December 30, 2013

A Heart Unswaying Comments

Rating: ★5.0

A heart unswaying on the water surface.
What burden is this; a love without a tragedy?
Such frail the human soul,
who are we to judge?
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Adam M Snow
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Peter Stavropoulos 31 December 2013

If you were Gertrude Stein, and lived in the Paris of the 1930's, then I would say this is a great poem. Adam, this poem shows vision and sensitivity. Best of luck.

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Adam M Snow

Adam M Snow

Phoenix, AZ
Adam M Snow
Adam M Snow
Phoenix, AZ
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