A Heart Torn In Two Comments

Your Dad and I splitting up was nothing to do with you. R was no part of it either, you and I have sort of discussed this a couple of times but not in great detail. Your Dad and I just weren't happy together anymore.We were when we were first together but we were very young and people change as they grow older. You know you can ask me anything you want to about this, I will NOT lie to you. Love you x

I think its amazing Sophiee x I feel sorry for yuu i like the ending line: D

aww... i feel so sorry for you! ! You excellent at writing poems! ! Loving It! ! xox

hy see its nice but u must make it smaller soo the reader wd get the idea its looks like a story

oh so so sad....for a child to be torn emotionally that way. unsettling and heartbreaking. I remember not being sure if my parents would remain together. it was sickening for me at the time. I just cried and prayed, not knowing what else to do. this poem is really touching and brings back those feelings of vulnerability. Sweetly sad.