Sunday, May 16, 2010

A Heart Torn Apart Comments

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My heart says stay
but my mind says go
For love will end the same
I'm not good enough for him
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Jessica Kissner
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Elbert Matt Loubser 16 May 2010

I can relate to the core of this poem, the emotion that u have brought forth from within it. This world is a hard place, and for those who express themselves with their hearts, it is a terrible world. Is this the burden we carry to be able to express ourselves? Please read some of my poems, I hope u will relate to them as I do to yours.

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Paul Judges 16 May 2010

Well written poem, Jessica

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Jessica Kissner

Jessica Kissner

Elmhurst, Illinois
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