Wednesday, July 16, 2008

A Heart To Spare Comments

Rating: 5.0

I broke down in tears
When I told you my fears
You patted my back
Then left me to pick up the slack
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Payyton Egerstaffer
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Surya . 18 June 2009

vow! beautifull and emotionaloem. voted10 surya

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Carrie Sprouse 21 July 2008

i love this poem, its sad and amazing

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I feel the pain in this piece and pray you feel better soon! You have a cute rhyme scheme going there and show alot of promise in your writing! Take care of U Shelley

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very good, very good about a broken heart.. ilyy booo! x3, millie

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Payyton Egerstaffer

Payyton Egerstaffer

Fort Polk, Louisiana
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