Friday, December 22, 2006

A Heart Shattering Secret Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the rain drops fall and the wing starts to blow
I found out a secret I never wanted to know
Now I can; t take it I really need to go
Get him name off my sleave
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Holly Somer
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Eddie Roa 12 January 2009

Hi! I’m Eddie Roa and I just got in to this website. By chance I came across your name in the list of poets and read some of your works. Good writes. I have posted some of my poems today and a few days ago.. My style ranges from light to dark poetry (modern enough but not postmodern) and some Japanese verse forms like haiku, senryu and tanka. I hope you will bother to check out my work. Thanks and happy writing.

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Catherine Rica Cosico 20 May 2008

Secrets that lies in the gloom sky pours like knives in our hearts...Pls read Hike in the Railway Bliss

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Halley Lee 30 July 2007

I love this poem. Great job!

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Jessica Rose 12 May 2007

wow...this is really good, there's so much feeling in this poem. ~JRose~

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Joe Hanus 22 December 2006

Your words all but bleed -Joe

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